It's a Keeper!

New book people. This one is definitely a keeper! I'm writing a new book called Fallen Angel. It's title is a little off setting but, you'll understand more once you read it. It's a book about vampires, inspired by the book Twilight. I'll be posting each chapter on my blog, one at a time. I want to know what you think about it. And I want the truth, if it's no good, then tell me! As many comments as possible if you please! Send suggestions, comments, and tell me if you think it's a good story. Send it to people that I know and get their comments as well. Enjoy!